aw, good luck to you then, Clare. I don't even know what I did - I was horrified! The worst case of tripe ever, and then I think I fixed it, except for it ends too abruptly. Or something. It's as if I lost my damned mind.
I first started it and it was so easy. Then some things happened here at the house and I got sick for quite awhile, my dog got sick, and I couldn't care about it. TI picked it back up and it threatened to get too long again, but I cut a portion of the original plot completely out and that worked, and then the very ending scene sucked out LOUD. I'm telling you, it was like some 12th grader ended it, complete with bad sex. wtf? I'm scarred. On top of that, I realize now and forever that I am never going to fit into the type of ebooks I was trying to be in unless by accident, not design. I mean, me personally, I like my vampire. He's rather unique and somewhat complicated, but even so, the very best I've wrested out of this is an IMPLIED HFN. Sigh.
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Date: 2010-04-27 11:29 am (UTC)I first started it and it was so easy. Then some things happened here at the house and I got sick for quite awhile, my dog got sick, and I couldn't care about it. TI picked it back up and it threatened to get too long again, but I cut a portion of the original plot completely out and that worked, and then the very ending scene sucked out LOUD. I'm telling you, it was like some 12th grader ended it, complete with bad sex. wtf? I'm scarred. On top of that, I realize now and forever that I am never going to fit into the type of ebooks I was trying to be in unless by accident, not design. I mean, me personally, I like my vampire. He's rather unique and somewhat complicated, but even so, the very best I've wrested out of this is an IMPLIED HFN. Sigh.