There were things in the story that I wondered about - the punctuation for one thing - had to resist the urge to put some of it in certain places because I wanted it to read as distressed or "off," trying to rush the words or be off balance. I kept just about everything I wanted for once without wondering if it was exactly correct, so I'm really happy to hear it works for you. So you made my night, too.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2008-10-22 06:38 am (UTC)