I really enjoyed your WIP. I don't know anything about Rising Wolf but the little bit of dialogue you posted made me want to read more.
This may not end up being the 7th page in my WIP but it should be close. The end of my story is further along than the start so pages are still changing. Has this ever happened to you? It seems like the beginning of a story should be easier to write than the end.
Anyway, One long story that I would like to finish has Starsky & Hutch on a few road trips. There isn’t a lot of action but I put them in various locations, which I hope will provide interest.
(Nov/Dec 1976)
“Hand hurt much?” Starsky glanced at Hutch across the front seat.
Hutch looked down at the healing scars.
“Not too bad.” Hutch replied, despite the throbbing. He was relieved to be away from therapy for a few days but the pain was still there.
Hutch glanced across at Starsky. The weight in the space between them made this trip feel more like a funeral procession than the celebratory send-off it was designed to be. They planned this to be a fun, hell-of-a-good time road trip. It was to be their last hurrah before Hutch submitted his resignation and got a new job, a new start, away from Bay City.
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Date: 2015-06-08 04:00 pm (UTC)This may not end up being the 7th page in my WIP but it should be close. The end of my story is further along than the start so pages are still changing. Has this ever happened to you? It seems like the beginning of a story should be easier to write than the end.
Anyway, One long story that I would like to finish has Starsky & Hutch on a few road trips. There isn’t a lot of action but I put them in various locations, which I hope will provide interest.
(Nov/Dec 1976)
“Hand hurt much?” Starsky glanced at Hutch across the front seat.
Hutch looked down at the healing scars.
“Not too bad.” Hutch replied, despite the throbbing. He was relieved to be away from therapy for a few days but the pain was still there.
Hutch glanced across at Starsky. The weight in the space between them made this trip feel more like a funeral procession than the celebratory send-off it was designed to be. They planned this to be a fun, hell-of-a-good time road trip. It was to be their last hurrah before Hutch submitted his resignation and got a new job, a new start, away from Bay City.