ext_14389 ([identity profile] kassidy62.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kassidy62 2008-10-22 11:43 am (UTC)

I stumbled over the first rush of unpunctuated words, then paused and started over. This time reading it specifically that way, embracing the muddle and the haste and the confusion. And that worked, it worked.

Normally I don't like throwing a reader out of the story that way, but I look at this piece differently so long as it worked for you in the end. Thanks for telling me.

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