Seven/Seven WIP meme

[kassidy62]

Hellooo, tagged by the lovely laughablelament, a new friend: seven lines from the seventh page of my longest WIP. I'm going with Book II of Rising Wolf (sequel to Beneath the Neon Moon) because Book I was done some months ago--

Kane moved in close, wiry, smaller than Zach, eager grin on his face. He ducked his head into the curve between Zach's shoulder and neck and breathed in. "Ah, that's nice. I missed your scent, Zach. Well, not that I ever thought I'd get to smell it again, or see you, since, well, you should be dead."

"I really hope you're amusing yourself," Zach husked, letting a tremor come through his voice. He eased his hands from behind his back.

No pressure, my wonderful flisters, but I'd love to see what tipitiwitchet (I know I can't see my gift fic, of course, but something else?), hardboiledbaby (and oh my GOD, I just realized I didn't wish you a happy birthday! Hope it was as incredible as you are!) loyseofverlaine, duluthgirl, gryphon2k (I saw you POSTED on your story!! Let me see more;), blackrabbit42, and marianrose are up to:)

Comments

[duluthgirl.livejournal.com]

Well, I really had to look hard for a story that actually had seven pages. All I could find was an old one I long ago gave up on.

I can't believe I'm posting this...

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“What’s it feel like — knowing you’re about to die?” Starsky said, staring at Hutch’s neck.

Hutch winced as the blade began to slice into his skin. “Starsk. Please.” He tried to wrench Starsky’s hand away, but his partner was too strong.

“Shut up!” Starsky yelled, yanking harshly at Hutch’s hair. “Shut your mouth before I open you up, you son of a bitch.”

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Wow, poorly written and freakish...don't ask.

[kassidy62.livejournal.com]

I don't find it poorly written at all! I am sorry you are so down on this! (And freak is my middle name, so:) I'm intrigued as hell - WHY, Starsk, why?
I bet if you posted this meme at your LJ you'd have others interested as well, just saying:))
Thanks for playing along.

[duluthgirl.livejournal.com]

:) If I posted, my flisters would say, "Oh, that's just Duluth having Starsky attack Hutch again..."

Actually, this story has always been in the back of my mind, but I can't work through it. Sigh. Stupid WiPs.